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The chart shows the number of days the average employee has off work per year in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparation where relevant.

The chart shows the number of days the average employee has off work per year in four different countries. 11grL
The table gives information about how many days the average employee takes off over the course of a year. Overall, Employees in Italy and the United Kingdom have more annual vacation time than those in the United States and Japan. Despite the fact that the four nations have almost the same amount of public holidays, workers in Italy and the United Kingdom are given more yearly leave. As can be seen from the table, each country has an average of ten public holidays every year. However, Japanese citizens have 3 days more than the average, while those in the UK have 2 days fewer. Employees in Italy and the United Kingdom are allowed to take vacations but are still paid for 31 and 27 days a year, respectively. On the other hand, Japan and the USA have have much fewer vacation days, with 11 and 12 days off. This is the end of my report.
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days the average employee takes off over the course of a year.
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Kingdom have more annual vacation time than those in the
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States and Japan. Despite the fact that the four nations have almost the same amount of public holidays, workers in Italy and the
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from the table, each country has an average of ten public holidays every year.
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, Japanese citizens have 3 days more than the average, while those in the UK have 2 days fewer. Employees in Italy and the
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Kingdom are
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much fewer vacation days, with 11 and 12 days off.

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IELTS academic The chart shows the number of days the average employee has off work per year in four different countries.

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