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The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen ﬁsh pies

The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen ﬁsh pies k9xe

The illustration above informs us of the steps taken to produce frozen fish pies. Each fish pie containing fresh salmon, peas, sauce and potatoes are stored in microwaveable containers. Potatoes transported to the factory have shelf-lives of one month. The are washed, peeled and cut into smaller pieces before they are put to a boil in water. After that, the potato slices are refrigerated so they become prepared to be kept in storage. These potatoes are used at a later stage to manufacture the pastry. Meanwhile, raw salmon are being delivered within half a day or less to the factory. The salmon slices are marinated in a mixture of lemon extract and salt just before they are steamed. Next, the skin and bones are separated manually from the salmon and disposed of immediately. Further inspection is carried out by professionals to examine the quality of the fish since the peas and chopped potatoes will be mixed together. The final product is wrapped tightly in the heat resistant packagings, to be kept in freezers for storage or future distribution.

The illustration above informs us of the steps taken to produce frozen fish pies. Each fish pie containing fresh salmon, peas, sauce and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
are stored
 in microwaveable containers.

Potatoes transported to the factory have shelf-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 of one month. The are washed
, peeled and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into smaller pieces This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they are put
 to a boil in water. After that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
 slices are refrigerated
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so
 they become prepared to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in storage. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 at a later stage to manufacture the pastry.

Meanwhile, raw salmon are being delivered
 within half a day or less to the factory. The salmon slices are marinated
 in a mixture of lemon extract and salt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they are steamed
. Next
, the skin and bones are separated
manually
 from the salmon and disposed of immediately. Further
 inspection is carried
 out by professionals to examine the quality of the fish since the peas and chopped You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 will be mixed
 together. The final product is wrapped
tightly
 in the This word is normally spelled with hyphen.heat-resistant
heat resistant
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packagings
, to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in freezers for storage or future distribution. 