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The diagram shows the way in which aluminium cans are processed.

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The diagram depicts the process of how aluminum cans are recycled. In general, there are a total of 7 stages, beginning with gathering the used cans, and ending up reusing them. First, the used cans are categorized by people into garbage bins that are just for aluminum. Then, the collectors will deliver the cans to factories by a truck. In the processing factory, the cans are cleaned, sorted, shredded and compressed. After that, the aluminum is placed in a certain thing that is used to heat. It is heated and melted there. The liquid aluminum is then shaped into rolls of 2. 5 to 6 mm thick, and its's recycled. 74% of Aluminum cans in UK are recycled with this process.
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cans
, and ending up reusing them.

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into garbage bins that are
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aluminum
. Then, the collectors will deliver the
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cans
to factories by a truck. In the processing factory, the
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cans
are cleaned
, sorted, shredded and compressed.

After that, the
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aluminum
is placed
in a certain thing
that is
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used
to heat. It
is heated
and melted there. The liquid
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is then shaped into rolls of 2. 5 to 6 mm thick, and
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the way in which aluminium cans are processed.

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