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the diagram shows the structure of solar panel and its use

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The diagram illustrates the solar panel construction and how it is used. Overall, the structure consists of a cube-shaped, with a clear glass and two pipes for either water or air inlet and outlet. First of all, there are two holes on the left and right of the square shape of the solar panel, which are the inlet and outlet pipes for either air or water transmission. Additionally, a sheet of square-shaped transparent glass is placed on top of the solar panel. Turning to the two processes, it begins with the air entering through the inlet of the panel. Subsequently, the atmospheric air which goes through the inlet is heated by the sunlight and produces warm air. Moving on to the water heating function, starting with the water running through the inlet pipe, the water then enters a zigzag pipeline. Simultaneously, the sun rays heat up the water and finally release the warm water afterward.
The diagram illustrates the solar panel construction and how it is
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used
.
Overall
, the structure consists of a cube-shaped, with a
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clear
glass and two pipes for either
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water
or
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air
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inlet
and outlet.

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First of all
, there are two holes on the
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left
and right of the square shape of the solar panel, which are the
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inlet
and outlet pipes for either
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air
or
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water
transmission.
Additionally
, a sheet of square-shaped transparent glass
is placed
on top of the solar panel.

Turning to the two processes, it
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begins
with the
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air
entering through the
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inlet
of the panel.
Subsequently
, the atmospheric
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air
which goes through the
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inlet
is heated
by the sunlight and produces warm
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air
. Moving on to the
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water
heating function, starting with the
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water
running through the
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inlet
pipe, the
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water
then enters a zigzag pipeline.
Simultaneously
, the sun rays heat up the
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water
and
finally
release the warm
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water
afterward.
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