Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Below shows the process of producing commercial concentrated apple juice

Below shows the process of producing commercial concentrated apple juice 55JWN
The given process chart illustrates the information about the process of production of commercial concentrated Apple juice. Overall, it can be seen clearly that this process is consists of 11 stages from collecting fresh apples from farms to the packaging of bottles containing juice for the consumers. Firstly, apples are collected from the Apple farm then send to the factory where washing and shorting of these apple's take place after that apples are sent in the shredding machine for the cutting of apples into small pieces the slices of apple's then put into the pressing machine where this apples are pressed. Then, pasteurization of apple's take place in which some chemicals are used to make the apples juice long-lasting and tasty. After that some specific enzymes are mixed into the mixture of pressed apple's through the enzymatic treatment. Then this mixture is filtered through the microfiltration. After that evaporation takes place in order to make concentrate pass through heated pipes. Then the apple juice is prepared and sent for the packaging into the bottles for the customers for use.
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
process chart illustrates the information about the process of production of commercial concentrated
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Apple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
juice
.
Overall
, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
clearly
that this process is consists of 11 stages from collecting fresh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apples
from farms to the packaging of bottles containing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
juice
for the consumers.
Firstly
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apples
are collected
from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Apple
farm then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
to the factory where washing and shorting of these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apple's
take place after that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apples
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
in the shredding machine for the cutting of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apples
into
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
pieces the slices of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apple's
then put into the pressing machine where
Did you mean "these"?
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apples
are pressed
. Then, pasteurization of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apple's
take place in which
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
chemicals are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apples
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
juice
long-lasting and tasty.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
specific enzymes
are mixed
into the mixture of pressed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apple's
through the enzymatic treatment. Then this mixture
is filtered
through the
Possible spelling mistake found.
microfiltration
.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
that evaporation takes place in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
concentrate pass through heated pipes. Then the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
juice
is prepared
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
for the packaging into the bottles for the customers for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Below shows the process of producing commercial concentrated apple juice

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
179 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts