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The diagram shows the steps of producing bricks for the building industry .

The diagram shows the steps of producing bricks for the building industry. 737nX

First of all, the first step the diagram the digger is used in order to manufacture bricks. The second step, this clay is used in order to produced bricks for filtered and then mixed with sand and water. The third step, the finishing mould is followed by cutting with a wire cutter. The next stage, bricks are placed in a drying oven during 24-48 hours. The fifth stage, dried bricks are put in cooling chamber, it may take a about 2days. Finally, packaging bricks is followed by delivering them to construction areas. Overall, . Producing bricks commences with digging clay and ends with delivering. It involves 7 main steps and 4 different objects and it may take about 2days.

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