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The diagram shows the stages and equipment used for making recycled paper from old newspapers.

The diagram shows the stages and equipment used for making recycled paper from old newspapers. kWNrK
The diagram explains how to create recycled paper by utilizing old newspapers. First, the old newspapers are torn to pieces and it is put in a bowl. In the second step 250 ml of water is poured in the bowl and is allowed to soak for exactly one hour. Later, using electric mixer, is used to form the pulp and this process is continued for the mixture for 45 seconds. When done with this stage, pour the mixture in a tray along with 100 ml of water and mix the mixture well. Later use a mesh, and slide it under the mixture. In the seventh stage, drain the water out, leaving the pulp or the soaked paper on the mesh which is blended together well now. Next we need to press the paper down and apply pressure to drain out any excess water and then use a rolling pin to flatten the pulp. Finally, we need to dry flatten paper twenty-four hours in sunlight.
The diagram
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explains
how to create recycled paper by utilizing
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old
newspapers.
First
, the
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old
newspapers
are torn
to pieces and it
is put
in a bowl. In the second step 250 ml of
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water
is poured
in the bowl and is
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allowed
to soak for exactly one hour. Later, using electric mixer, is
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used
to form the pulp and this process
is continued
for the
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mixture
for 45 seconds. When done with this stage, pour the
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mixture
in a tray along with 100 ml of
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water
and mix the
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mixture
well. Later
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use
a mesh, and slide it under the
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mixture
. In the seventh stage, drain the
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water
out, leaving the pulp or the soaked paper on the mesh which
is blended
together well
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now
.
Next
we need to press the paper down and apply pressure to drain out any excess
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water
and then
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use
a rolling pin to flatten the pulp.
Finally
, we need to dry flatten paper twenty-four hours in sunlight.
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