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some people think that thr best way to increase road safety are increasing minimum age for driving cars and riding bikes. Do you agree or disagree?

some people think that thr best way to increase road safety are increasing minimum age for driving cars and riding bikes. x8WQN
A number of people opine that raising the minimum age for driving the cars or riding the bike are the only solid way to ensure the road safety. While it is true to say that this notion is effective to some extent actually i completely disagree with this opinion and think that increasing age number will never offer any kind of surety that can reduce road accidents. On the othet hand, it can not be undenied that most of the young people might be immature and so they may drive recklessly without following any rules and regulations. Moreover, when they are driving, they do not have any control towards their car owing to lack of experience and training; In addition, they don’t hold any driving license, eventually they dont care about pedestrians while driving in the roads. As they are not conscious while driving, accidents can occur any time. To illustrate, if the brakes of a car fail to work, they will be panicked, and accidents are more likely to occur. However, I would like to say that there are plethora of methods to ensure road safety rather than age numbers. It is needless to say that most of the accidents occur because of taking drugs and alcohol. Moreover, authorities are not sincere to enforce laws, such as huge fines or ban the drivers. Furthermore, most of the cities had become a congested era nowadays, as a consequence drivers feel exhausted in the traffic jam, as a result accidents are occurring rapidly. To Conclude, age Number is one of the reasons for road accidents; nevertheless, there are an ample of reasons for occurring accidents. Government sincerity and some laws that will ensure road safety regarding this issue.
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hand, it can not be
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immature and
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, they do not have any control towards their car owing to lack of experience and training;
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,
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can occur any time. To illustrate, if the brakes of a car fail to work, they will
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are more likely to occur.

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safety
rather
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. It is needless to say that most of the
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, authorities are not sincere to enforce laws, such as huge fines or ban the drivers.
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are occurring
rapidly
.
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,
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road
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Government
sincerity and
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laws that will ensure
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safety regarding this issue.
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IELTS academic some people think that thr best way to increase road safety are increasing minimum age for driving cars and riding bikes.

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