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The diagram shows the process of olive oil producing

The diagram shows the process of olive oil producing 3LMNJ

The diagram reflects the methods of producing olive oil. It is clear that there are 7 steps in the process, beginning with collecting olives and ending with selling them to the customers. At the beginning of the process, the olives which were ripe are picking from the olive trees. Following this, these chosen olives are rinsed in cold water and early transported to the appropriate point. Then, they are smashed by a special machine until these olives are at the standards. After that, they are classified into 2 types: olive paste and olive stones. For the olive paste, they are got into a bag with holes and delivered to the site where they were under the pressure. The next step is when they are come into the other special machine and separated. At this time, these olive products continue being divided into 2 sorts: oil and water. The final step is trading these perfect goods in outlets and supermarkets so that the customers can come and buy them.

The diagram reflects the methods of producing olive oil.

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clear
 that there are 7 steps in the process, beginning with collecting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
 and ending with selling them to the customers.

At the beginning of the process, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
 which were ripe are picking from the olive trees. Following this, these chosen You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are rinsed
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water and early transported to the appropriate point. Then, they are smashed
 by a special machine until these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
 are at the standards. After that, they are classified
 into 2 types: olive paste and olive stones.

For the olive paste, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 into a bag with holes and delivered to the site where they were under the pressure. The next
 step is when they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 into the other special machine and separated. At this time, these olive products continue being divided
 into 2 sorts: oil and water. The final step is trading these perfect This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 in outlets and supermarkets This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the customers can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 them. 