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Enrollments by Local and Overseas students in Australian universities

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The given graphs depict the registration of international students and native students in Australian universities over a decade. Overall the registration of overseas students shows a consistent increase while the registration of local students shows a sudden increase for some time period and starts to become consistent. The number of foreign students enrolled in the year 2001 was about 20000. There is a consistent increase in the folowing years. By 2010 the number of enrollments went up to 80000. The consistent increase denotes that the number of enrollments by international students has become more and more every year. The number of native students who registered in the year 2001 was about 40000. There is a consistent increase in the number of enrollments till 2007 after which the enrollments plateau in the following years. In comparison the number of enrollements in the begining of the decade was higher for local students but after a few years the enrollments by international students seem to have increased.
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and native
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students
in Australian universities over a decade.

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the registration of overseas
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while the registration of local
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students
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a sudden
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some
time period and
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starts
to become consistent.

The
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number
of foreign
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students
enrolled in the
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year
2001 was about 20000. There is a
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consistent
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increase
in the
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years. By 2010 the
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number
of
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enrollments
went up to 80000. The
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consistent
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increase
denotes that the
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number
of
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enrollments
by international
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students
has become more and more every year.

The
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number
of native
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students
who registered in the
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year
2001 was about 40000. There is a
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consistent
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increase
in the
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number
of
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enrollments
till 2007 after which the
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plateau in the following years. In
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comparison
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of the decade was higher for local
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after a few years the
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by international
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seem to have increased.
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