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The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant. jXPp

The line graph illustrates rapid growth in the consumption of renewable energy in the USA between the period of 1949 and 2008. The total energy usage overtime has risen since 1949 until 2008. During this period wood and hydroelectric power energies are the main source of energy in the USA and the consumption of these renewable energies has increased after 1949 (hydroelectric power and wood until 1996 and 1989, respectively). In 1981, Biofuels energy began to be utilised, which rose rapidly with a quadrillion Btu per year. Ultimately, wind power also started to be consumed since 1900s, however it gradually increases its usage. The combination of Biofuels and wind power consumption reduced the usage of hydroelectric power and wood energies after (1996 and 1989, respectively).

The line graph illustrates rapid growth in the consumption of renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 in the USA between the period of 1949 and 2008.

The total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 usage overtime has risen since 1949 until 2008. During this period wood and hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
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energies
 are the main source of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 in the USA and the consumption of these renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energies
 has increased after 1949 (hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 and wood until 1996 and 1989, respectively
). In 1981, Biofuels You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 began to be Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.utilized
utilised
, which rose rapidly
 with a quadrillion Btu per year.

Ultimately
, wind You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to be consumed
 since 1900s, however
 it gradually
 increases its usage. The combination of Biofuels and wind You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 consumption This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 the usage of hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 and wood You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energies
 after (1996 and 1989, respectively
). 