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the diagram shows how to recycle organic waste to produce fertilizers

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The diagram illustrates the process of making natural garden fertilizer from organic waste. In general, this process consists of 2 stages: material preparation and composting. The first stage is divided into three steps. First of all, we need to prepare a two-cubic-meter container with a number of vents on each side of its body which enable air to flow in and out. Then, in 15cm thick layers, organic items namely food scraps, grass clippings, and newspaper scraps are stacked within the container one by one. In the last step of this stage, nitrogen and hot water are added in order to accelerate the decomposition. After finishing the pre-processing, we sealed the mouth of the container and leave it for approximately half a year.
The diagram illustrates the process of making natural garden fertilizer from organic waste.
In general
, this process consists of 2 stages: material preparation and composting.

The
first
stage
is divided
into three steps.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, we need to prepare a two-cubic-meter container with a number of vents on each side of its body which enable air to flow in and out. Then, in
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "15 cm"
15cm
thick layers, organic items
namely
food scraps, grass clippings, and newspaper scraps
are stacked
within the container one by one. In the last step of this stage, nitrogen and hot water are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
in order to accelerate the decomposition.

After finishing the
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pre-processing
, we sealed the mouth of the container and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
it for approximately half a year.
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