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Describe an island before and now

Describe an island before and now Q8ERw

The two maps illustrate a number of changes to an island before and after being constructed facilities for tourism’s purpose. Overall, we can see that the island made many improvements during this period, including infrastructure and transportation. In the past, it was desolate except for some wild plants, mainly consisting of coconut trees along the shoreline. After some major developments, a newly built reception is constructed in the centre, and a restaurant located to the north will serve guests conveniently. They built a pier in the south of the island in order to improve transportation from other places. Moreover, a vehicle track is also constructed surrounding reception, restaurant and pier. What is more, there are various new accommodations for citizens and travellers and footpath built surrounding houses, to each house and the beach. In addition, a dedicated swimming area is now available, which contributes to the tourism industry of the island.

The two maps illustrate a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 to an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after being constructed
 facilities for tourism’s purpose. Overall
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 made This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 improvements during this period, including infrastructure and transportation.

In the past, it was desolate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 wild plants, mainly
 consisting of coconut trees along the shoreline. After This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 major developments, a newly
 built reception is constructed
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
, and a restaurant located to the north will serve guests conveniently
. They built a pier in the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 transportation from other places.

Moreover
, a vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 is also
 constructed surrounding reception, restaurant and pier. What is more
, there are various new accommodations for citizens and Possible spelling mistake found.travelers
travellers
 and footpath built surrounding This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, to each This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and the beach. In addition
, a dedicated swimming area is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 available, which contributes to the tourism industry of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. 