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The diagram shows how To Make Orange Juice.

The diagram shows how To Make Orange Juice. RyGlG
The illustration depicts how to manufacture orange juice. Overall, there are 6 main staps, commencing with collecting oranges known as principal ingredient and ending with serving to the shop. Priorily, fresh oranges, which are delivered to factory, are carefully washed. Later, fruit is extrated etheir waste solid used for animal feed or original juice. At this point, juice is neither packaged and debut at shop nor transported to evaporational facility by refrigerator truck. Evaporation leads removing water and the result is concentarted juice. After canning, they are transported to warehouse of factory where water is added to be commercial orange juice. Eventually, packaging takes place before being puplished to supermarket.
The illustration depicts how to manufacture orange juice.

Overall
, there are 6
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main staps
, commencing with collecting oranges known as principal ingredient and ending with serving to the shop.

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Priorily
, fresh oranges, which
are delivered
to factory, are
carefully
washed. Later, fruit is
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extrated
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etheir
waste solid
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used
for animal feed or original
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juice
. At this point,
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juice
is neither packaged and debut at shop nor transported to
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evaporational
facility by refrigerator truck.

Evaporation leads removing water and the result is
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concentarted
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juice
. After canning, they
are transported
to warehouse of factory where water is
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added
to be commercial orange
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juice
.
Eventually
, packaging takes place
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before
being
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puplished
to supermarket.
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110 words
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