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Transport modes in european 1960-2000

Transport modes in european 1960-2000 k5PbK

The bar chart describes/illustrates/provides information on different transport modes in a European city in the period from 1960 to 2000. In general/Generally/Overall, car became increasingly prevalent while bike and foot lost their popularity over time. In detail, foot which used to be the most favorite choice of transport and started with approximately 35% declined by around three times after two decades. In the same way/Likewise/Similarly, bike grew much less common over time, falling from 25% to about 5% over twenty years. By contrast, car, despite bottoming the chart with 5% in 1960, rose/escalated to the top position and grew/increased/rose/soared/surged by 7 times over the years. Meanwhile/However/By comparison, bus saw a fluctuation/seesawed/fluctuated/witnessed ups and downs between about 15% and 25% over the time. Strikingly, car commenced/started with the lowest point of 5% in 1960, a figure being the same as bike in 2000.

The bar chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
/illustrates/provides information on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 transport modes in a European city in the period from 1960 to 2000.

In general
/Generally
/Overall
, car became increasingly
 prevalent while bike and foot lost their popularity You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 time.

In detail, foot which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be the most favorite choice of transport and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with approximately 35% declined by around three times after two decades. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 the same way/Likewise
/Similarly
, bike grew much less common You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 time, falling from 25% to about 5% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 twenty years. By contrast, car, despite bottoming the chart with 5% in 1960, rose/escalated to the top position and grew/increased/rose/soared/surged by 7 times You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 the years. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Meanwhile,
Meanwhile
/However
/By comparison, bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a fluctuation/seesawed/fluctuated/witnessed ups and downs between about 15% and 25% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 the time.

Strikingly
, car commenced/This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with the lowest point of 5% in 1960, a figure being the same as bike in 2000. 