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The map indicates the development of two villages Meadow-side and Fon-ton from 1962 to now.

The map indicates the development of two villages Meadow-side and Fon-ton from 1962 to now. k5Pb2
The map indicates the development of two villages Meadow-side and Fon-ton from 1962 to now. In general, two villages have experienced a host of changes with the birth of huge buildings and the improvement of transportation over five decades. Meadow-side, for example, was transformed from a small village into a modern one with a series of new facilities rising. There used to be a simple path running along the village which was replaced by two big roads in 1985. By dint of the expansion of roads, a number of buildings sprang from a housing estate area, complex to super store one that were located right near meadow-side suburbs after five decades Fon-ton village, however, witnessed almost no change when a modest railway was still situated by its side. Strikingly, only thanks to the construction of the road linking two villages did traveling of citizens become easier in 1985. In the last period, a hotel, station and business park were erected on both sides of this road.
The map indicates the development of two
villages
Meadow-side and
Fon-ton
from 1962 to
now
.
In general
, two
villages
have experienced a host of
changes
with the birth of huge buildings and the improvement of transportation over five decades.

Meadow-side,
for example
,
was transformed
from a
small
village
into a modern one with a series of new facilities rising. There
used
to be a simple path running along the
village
which
was replaced
by two
big
roads
in 1985. By dint of the expansion of
roads
, a number of buildings sprang from a housing estate area, complex to super store one that
were located
right near meadow-side suburbs after five
decades


Fon-ton
village
,
however
, witnessed almost no
change
when a modest railway was
still
situated by its side.
Strikingly
,
only
thanks to the construction of the
road
linking two
villages
did traveling
of citizens become easier in 1985. In the last period, a hotel, station and business park
were erected
on both sides of this
road
.
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