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The diagram shows how energy is produced from coal.

The diagram shows how energy is produced from coal. 95yej
The picture illustrates the process of production of energy from coal. Overall, it is clear that this process contain various stages which begins with adding coal in furnace, and ends with collecting electricity. At the first stage in this process coal and oxygen are added in furnace to which coal is burned out. From this raw syngas is produced. After this, CO2 Mercury sulphur remove from this and purified syngas is used in process. At the next stage, purified gas fill in gas turbine which connected to generate, and this generator convert syngas into electricity and send it to electricity tower. Along with this, the hot exhaust gasses which produced from gas turbine, is sent to heat recovery steam generator. Then the steam produced by this heat recovery steam generator passes through the steam turbine and with the help of generator steam is converted into electricity and then send to tower.
The picture illustrates the process of production of energy from coal.

Overall
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that this process contain various stages which
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begins
with adding coal in furnace, and ends with collecting electricity.

At the
first
stage in this process coal and oxygen are
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added
in furnace to which coal
is burned
out. From this raw
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syngas
is produced
. After this, CO2 Mercury
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sulphur
remove from this and purified
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syngas
is
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used
in process.

At the
next
stage, purified gas fill in gas turbine which connected to generate, and this generator convert
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syngas
into electricity and
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send
it to electricity tower. Along with this, the hot exhaust gasses which produced from gas turbine, is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to heat recovery steam generator. Then the steam produced by this heat recovery steam generator passes through the steam turbine and with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of generator steam
is converted
into electricity and then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
to tower.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how energy is produced from coal.

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