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The diagram shows how a wood pellet boiler is used to provide heat and hot water for a house

The diagram shows how a wood pellet boiler is used to provide heat and hot water for a house 8aVYV
The diagram shows how a wood pellet boiler is used to provide heat and hot water for a house. The pellets are burned to produce heat, which is then distributed through the house. To begin, a truck delivers wood pellets to the house, and they are stored in a large container. Then, when heat is needed, the pellets move to the boiler, where they are burned to heat up water. Next, the hot water moves to several places in the house. Some of it goes to pipes under the floor for under-floor heating. Some of it also goes to a radiator to heat the rooms of the house. Additionally, some of the hot water goes to a hot water tank, which holds the water for washing and bathing. After the hot water has heated the house, it returns as cool water to the boiler, where it is heated to be used again.
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how a wood
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pellet
boiler is
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used
to provide
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heat
and hot water

for a
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house
. The
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pellets
are burned
to produce
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heat
, which is then distributed

through the
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house
.

To
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begin
, a truck delivers wood
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pellets
to the
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house
, and they
are stored
in a large

container. Then, when
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heat
is needed
, the
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pellets
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move
to the boiler, where they

are burned
to
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heat
up
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water
.
Next
, the hot
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water
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moves
to several places in the

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house
.
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Some
of it goes to pipes under the floor for under-floor heating.
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Some
of

it
also
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heat
the rooms of the
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house
.
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,
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some of the
hot
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water
goes to a hot
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water
tank, which holds the
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water
for washing and

bathing. After the hot
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water
has heated the
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house
, it returns as cool
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water
to

the boiler, where it
is heated
to be
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used
again.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how a wood pellet boiler is used to provide heat and hot water for a house

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2 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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