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The diagram shows how a dredging boat will be used to keep the canals in Venice clear of mud. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how a dredging boat will be used to keep the canals in Venice clear of mud. 9QKrr
The picture shows a new dredging boat that will be used to dig up the mud from canals in Venice. Overall, it can be clearly seen that a dredger will be used in order to extract the slurry from its beneath. Also, the dredging boat will provide Venice with an effective means of keeping its canals clean, without having to drain them. The canal dredger would have four major functional units and one connecting unit. The entire system of canal dredger will be supported and deployed on a noiseless boat. The boat will have two hydraulic arms, which are planned to connect with a centrifugal pump and rotor blades. There will be a long tube connecting the pump to a large container called a ‘shuttle boat’. Operating the dredging boat is going to be a simple procedure. First of all, the hydraulic arms will be lowered until the rotating blades reach the mud below. Then, the blades would turn the mud into slurry. This will then be sucked up by the pump. It will pass through the long tube and into the shuttle boat. Finally, the shuttle boat is planned to be towed out of Venice and the mud and slurry will be dumped.
The picture
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shows
a new dredging
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boat
that will be
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used
to dig up the
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mud
from canals in Venice.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that a dredger will be
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used
in order to extract the slurry from its beneath.
Also
, the dredging
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boat
will provide Venice with an effective means of keeping its canals clean, without having to drain them.

The canal dredger would have four major functional units and one connecting unit. The entire system of canal dredger will
be supported
and deployed on a noiseless
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boat
.
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The
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boat
will have two hydraulic arms, which
are planned
to connect with a centrifugal pump and rotor blades. There will be a long tube connecting the pump to a large container called a ‘shuttle boat’.

Operating the dredging
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boat
is going to be a simple procedure.
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First of all
, the hydraulic arms will
be lowered
until the rotating blades reach the
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mud
below. Then, the blades would turn the
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mud
into slurry. This will then
be sucked
up by the pump. It will pass through the long tube and into the shuttle
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boat
.
Finally
, the shuttle
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boat
is planned
to
be towed
out of Venice and the
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mud
and slurry will
be dumped
.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how a dredging boat will be used to keep the canals in Venice clear of mud.

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204 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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