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The 2 given pictures illustrate the center of Islip town in 2010 and in 2015.

The 2 given pictures illustrate the center of Islip town in 2010 and in 2015. k5DeO
The given maps illustrate about development in town known as Islip from 2010 to 2015. Overall, there was considerable development can be seen in town and it was gradually transformed from rural area to large residential area. In 2010, the number of shops were located on both sides of main roads and on north side of town the shops were connected to countryside. On south side of town, the school and park was located and in between of them housing was constructed. After five years, there were significant changes can be observed and the most notable changes was road. Earlier, the road was straight and does not covered the town. However, in 2015, the was built in such a way that it covers the whole town. The shops which were connected to countryside were replaced by bus station, shopping center, car park and new housing and just below this, there was a path for pedestrains. Whilst, the school and shops were at same position as in 2010. However, the size of park got reduced and new housing is added. To conclude, the Islip town is moving towards the new infrastructure.
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Islip
from 2010 to 2015.

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, there was considerable development can be
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seen
in
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town
and it was
gradually
transformed from

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rural
area to large residential area.

In 2010, the number of shops
were located
on both sides of main roads and on north side of
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town
the

shops
were connected
to countryside. On south side of
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town
, the school and park
was located
and in between

of them housing
was constructed
.

After five years, there were significant
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changes
can
be observed
and the most notable
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changes
was road. Earlier,

the road was straight and does not
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covered
the
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town
.
However
, in 2015, the
was built
in such a way that

it covers the whole
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town
. The shops which
were connected
to countryside
were replaced
by bus station,

shopping center, car park and new housing and
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just
below this, there was a path for
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pedestrains
. Whilst,

the school and shops were at same position as in 2010.
However
, the size of park
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got
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reduced
and new housing

is
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added
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, the
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Islip
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town
is moving towards the new infrastructure.
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IELTS academic The 2 given pictures illustrate the center of Islip town in 2010 and in 2015.

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