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The tables below show the average hours work by part time and full time men and women in three different countries in 2002compared them with European countries

The tables below show the average hours work by part time and full time men and women in three different countries in 2002compared them with European countries 3xVJY
The report reveals the information regarding the average number of hours work by workers full time and part time in three different European nations in the year 2002. Overall, the numbers of hours worked by men is the highest in full time work, whereas this figure for women was more in part time jobs. In 2002, the number of average hours in full time work in Germany, which was the biggest, was 42. 5 hours for males and nearly 40 hours for females, followed by Netherlands which accounted for 38 hours for both. Meanwhile, this figure for the UK was 37 hours for women which was slightly lower than that of men with 37. 8 hours. All in all, men contributes more hours to work as compared to women. With regards to the figure for part time working hours, Germany still stood on the top with 30 hours for females and a little bit lower for females. Moreover, Netherland and the UK represented the opposite trend of each other. In 2002, in Netherland, the number of hours for women was more ( i. e. 29. 2 hours)than men( i. e. 28), however, this figure in the UK was 29 hours for males and for females it was 1% less. In general, women work higher than their counterparts male workers.
The report reveals the information regarding the average
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IELTS academic The tables below show the average hours work by part time and full time men and women in three different countries in 2002compared them with European countries

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