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Summarize the given pie charts and report the main points and compare where ever relavent

Summarize the given pie charts and report the main points and compare where ever relavent GwNom
The supplied bar charts juxtapose both the modes of transport, cycling and driving that people generally use in order to reach their work location. Overall, both the types have their advantages and disadvantages, whereas to improve their health and to eradicate pollution people prefer cycling. While to reach the destination on time and to have a sophisticated and safe journey some of them adopt driving as their transport. Cycling is an excellent mode of travel. Health was one major concern for about 30percentage of the people who prefer cycling as their means. Also threefold of the total consider pollution and to reduce it reach their destination by cycling. And only 15% of the total outlay project that they can get rid of the parking problem using this option. whereas, less cost and speed were only considered by 25% of the total. Alongside, driving was also adopted as an option for travel. Approximately 60percent opt this to travel with luxury and to cover long distances in stipulated time. And an equal number preferred this as it has a spacious interior to carry their belongings. while only 11% believe that this is the safest way to travel.
The supplied bar charts juxtapose both the modes of transport,

cycling and driving that
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people
generally
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in order to reach their work location.

Overall
, both the types have their advantages and disadvantages,

whereas to
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improve
their health and to eradicate pollution
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people
prefer cycling.

While to reach the destination on time and to have a sophisticated and safe journey
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some
of them adopt driving as their transport.

Cycling is an excellent mode of
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travel
. Health was one major concern for about 30percentage of the
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people
who prefer cycling as their means.

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Also
threefold of the total consider pollution and to
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reduce
it reach their destination by cycling. And
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15% of the

total outlay project that they can
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get
rid of the parking problem using this option.
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whereas
, less cost and speed were
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only
considered by 25% of the total.

Alongside, driving was
also
adopted as an option for
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travel
. Approximately 60percent

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opt
this to
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travel
with luxury and to cover long distances in stipulated time.

And an equal number preferred this as it has a spacious interior to carry their belongings.

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while
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only
11% believe that this is the safest way to
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travel
.
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IELTS academic Summarize the given pie charts and report the main points and compare where ever relavent

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