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The diagram shows a process for producing electricity for home use.

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The diagram shows a process for producing electricity for home use. The equipment consists of a large tank, boxes and pipes that would be able to fit into a garage-sized room. Electricity is produced using methane gas, generated from a mix of compost and water in a large steel tank. The tank is about the same height as a person and about twice as wide. Methane rises to the top of the tank and is collected and stored in a gas storage system. The stored gas is the fuel source used in the energy conversions that happen next. Once compressed in a gas compressor, the methane fuels a combustion engine, which in turn produces mechanical energy. Having been transferred to a generator, the mechanical energy is then transformed into electrical energy, which is then stored in a battery. At this stage the electricity is ready for home use.
The diagram
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a process for producing electricity for home
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use
. The equipment consists of a large
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tank
, boxes and pipes that would be able to fit into a garage-sized room.

Electricity
is produced
using methane
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gas
, generated from a mix of compost and water in a large steel
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tank
. The
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tank
is about the same height as a person and about twice as wide. Methane rises to the top of the
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tank
and
is collected
and stored in a
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gas
storage system. The stored
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gas
is the fuel source
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used
in the
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energy
conversions that happen
next
.

Once compressed in a
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gas
compressor, the methane fuels a combustion engine, which in turn produces mechanical
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energy
. Having
been transferred
to a generator, the mechanical
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energy
is then transformed into electrical
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energy
, which is then stored in a battery. At this stage the electricity is ready for home
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use
.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows a process for producing electricity for home use.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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