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The diagram represents information about the process by which instant noodles are produced.

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The diagram represents information about the process by which instant noodles are produced. Overall, it is obvious that there are eight main stages in the process of manufacturing instant noodles, commencing with storing raw ingredients and culminating in noodles being packaged for later consumption. However, only five main steps are used to make cups of noodles, excluding the storage of flour and the occurrence of the conveyor. At the first stage of the instant noodles-producing process, flour is taken from a truck into two tower silos for storage before putting it into a mixing machine, where is mixed with water and oil. At the following stage, this mixture is put through a roller, and then it is transferred to the sheets of dough before being cut into noodles by strips. Before being cooked and left to dry at a suitable temperature, these noodles are pressed into well-shaped circular discs. The process concludes with the two steps which involve packaging the noodles. Firstly, vegetables and spices are put into these available cups for adding flavor. Finally, the process finishes with a step being labeled and sealed and then the factory will transform these products to agents, markets, and supermarkets for servicing customer needs.
The diagram represents information about the
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by which instant
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noodles
are produced
.

Overall
, it is obvious that there are eight main stages in the
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process
of manufacturing instant
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noodles
, commencing with storing raw ingredients and culminating in
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noodles
being packaged
for later consumption.
However
,
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only
five main steps are
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used
to
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make
cups of
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noodles
, excluding the storage of flour and the occurrence of the conveyor.

At the
first
stage of the instant noodles-producing
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process
, flour
is taken
from a truck into two tower silos for storage
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before
putting it into a mixing machine, where
is mixed
with water and oil. At the following stage, this mixture
is put
through a roller, and then it
is transferred
to the sheets of dough
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before
being
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cut
into
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noodles
by strips.
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Before
being cooked
and
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left
to dry at a suitable temperature, these
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noodles
are pressed
into well-shaped circular discs.

The
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process
concludes with the two steps which involve packaging the
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noodles
.
Firstly
, vegetables and spices
are put
into these available cups for adding flavor.
Finally
, the
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process
finishes with a step
being labeled
and sealed and then the factory will transform these products to agents, markets, and supermarkets for servicing customer needs.
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202 words
6.5
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