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humankind can do nothing to improve the environment. While, government and large corporation can make a difference. it is a controversial issue, so it is little difficult to comment on it. all the relivent view point would be dicuss in the subsequent paragraphs.

humankind can do nothing to improve the environment. While, government and large corporation can make a difference. it is a controversial issue, so it is little difficult to comment on it. all the relivent view point would be dicuss in the subsequent paragraphs. eA6W7
To embark with, mankind can do nothing to improve the environment. the first and foremost reasons, today environment pollution because of human beings. As is scienclist make the society various types of devices for the reason to grow the econmie level of country. However, with the help of this harmful pollution attacked to the enviornment. As a result, pollution effect to the human body as well as animals life. Meanwhile, humankind should do same effort to improve the enviornment. For example, Nowadays, individuals force to create the high level of devices and various types of technology noticed by survey. Furthermore, high level of companies and government would make different types of plan to protect the environment. However, nothing success there plan because, cxan government do something for people. As a consequently, people face the diffcutly of pollution cleaning the environment is the most impornment for the reason that, humankind feel save in there states. for intanse, According to survey, bad setution of envirnment credit give to the government and big companies. To conclude, although, to protect the environment to most important for the human beings and animals. yet, government as well as individuals do not do anything to protect the environment.
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effect to the human body
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IELTS academic humankind can do nothing to improve the environment. While, government and large corporation can make a difference. it is a controversial issue, so it is little difficult to comment on it. all the relivent view point would be dicuss in the subsequent paragraphs.

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