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The bar graph elucidates the male and female is roaming for six laborious reasons in a perticular nation. The data given in miles.

The bar graph elucidates the male and female is roaming for six laborious reasons in a perticular nation. The data given in miles. LbkyV
The bar graph elucidates the male and female is roaming for six laborious reasons in a perticular nation. The data given in miles. The bar graph elucidates the male and female is roaming for six laborious reasons in a perticular nation. The data given in miles. The bar graph elucidates the male and female is roaming for six laborious reasons in a perticular nation. The data given in miles. The bar graph elucidates the male and female is roaming for six laborious reasons in a perticular nation. The data given in miles.
The bar
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the male and
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female
is roaming for six
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laborious
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reasons
in a
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perticular
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nation
. The
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data
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given
in miles.

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The
bar
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graph
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elucidates
the male and
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female
is roaming for six
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laborious
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reasons
in a
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perticular
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nation
.
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The
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data
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given
in miles.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
bar
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graph
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
elucidates
the male and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
female
is roaming for six
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laborious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
in a
Possible spelling mistake found.
perticular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
data
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
in miles.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
bar
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
graph
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
elucidates
the male and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
female
is roaming for six
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laborious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
in a
Possible spelling mistake found.
perticular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
data
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
in miles.
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IELTS academic The bar graph elucidates the male and female is roaming for six laborious reasons in a perticular nation. The data given in miles.

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4 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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