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manufacturing paint and its methods

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The given diagram illustrates the paint-making process. As can be seen, it is a man-made process that involves seven stages, beginning with the mixing of raw materials and ending in delivery. Firstly, raw materials such as solvents, oils, resins and tints are pumped from a tank farm and pre-mixed with pigments in a different tank. A metering deck is used to measure the quantity and proportion of each element. When the base is formed, it is then placed on a mill to ensure that all the components are properly mixed. At the same time, the let-down process combines the rest of the raw materials in a different tank. Then the mill-base is added to the let-down by stirring and paint is formed. This phase can be repeated in case the paint has not resulted as expected. Upon obtaining the final composition, paint of different colours is dispensed in separate cans by a filling machine. Once the canning process is completed, the cans are labelled accordingly. Finally, the cans of paint are packaged in cartons, ready to be shipped and delivered to customers.
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process
. As
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be
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seen
, it is a
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man
-made
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process
that involves seven stages, beginning with the mixing of raw materials and ending in delivery.

Firstly
, raw materials such as solvents, oils, resins and tints
are pumped
from a tank farm and
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pre-mixed
with pigments in a
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different
tank. A metering deck is
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used
to measure the quantity and proportion of each element.

When the base
is formed
, it is then placed on a mill to ensure that all the components are
properly
mixed. At the same time, the
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let
-down
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process
combines the rest of the raw materials in a
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different
tank. Then the mill-base is
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added
to the
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let
-down by stirring and
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paint
is formed
. This phase
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can
be repeated
in case the
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paint
has not resulted as
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expected
.

Upon obtaining the final composition,
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paint
of
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different
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colours
is dispensed
in separate
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cans
by a filling machine. Once the canning
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process
is completed
, the
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cans
are labelled
accordingly
.
Finally
, the
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cans
of
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paint
are packaged
in cartons, ready to
be shipped
and delivered to customers.
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IELTS academic manufacturing paint and its methods

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182 words
6.0
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