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The diagram provides the information how the tea is produced in step by step.

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The diagram provides the information how the tea is produced in step by step. Overall, the process consists of seven stages, starting with harvesting ans ending up with packing as the last stage. In the first stage, the tea is harvested by collecting only two leaves and one bud from each of the individual tree. After that, moisture in tea leaves are need to be removed as much as possible under the withering stage. Then the dried leaves are collected and transferred into the roller machine in order to make it into small pieces. In the next stage, leaves will be fermented to proceed oxidization reaction by exposing it into the air. The oxidized leaves will turned black after fermentation. Following this, the fermentation process is stopped by hot air blow drying. The leaves are then transfer to seives for grading. Finally, graded leaves are packed in premium aluminium moisture-proof cases.
The diagram provides the information how the tea
is produced
in step by step.

Overall
, the process consists of seven
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stages
, starting with harvesting ans ending up with packing as the last stage.

In the
first
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stage
, the tea
is harvested
by collecting
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only
two
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leaves
and one bud from each of the individual tree. After that, moisture in tea
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leaves
are need
to
be removed
as much as possible under the withering
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stage
. Then the dried
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leaves
are collected
and transferred into the roller machine in order to
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make
it into
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small
pieces.

In the
next
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stage
,
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leaves
will
be fermented
to proceed oxidization reaction by exposing it into the air. The oxidized
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leaves
will turned black after fermentation. Following this, the fermentation process is
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stopped
by hot air
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blow drying
. The
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leaves
are then transfer to
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seives
for grading.
Finally
, graded
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leaves
are packed
in premium
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aluminium
moisture-proof cases.
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IELTS academic The diagram provides the information how the tea is produced in step by step.

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4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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