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The chart illustrates the proportion of small, medium, large corporations using social networking sites for commercial purposes from 2012 to 2016.

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The chart illustrates the proportion of small, medium, large corporations using social networking sites for commercial purposes from 2012 to 2016. It is clear that figures for all types of companies that utilized social media experienced an upward trend. In terms of individuals, while large companies had the most significant social media presence over the given period. In 2012, starting at about 78%, the percentage of large firms in social media usage was than others, then slightly decreased to 76% two years later. At the same time, compared to small and medium companies, these figures witnessed a steady increase. Both sized businesses accounted for a low percentage just about 32% for medium companies and 27% for the other in 2012. And the change was respectively witnessed after 2 years with a 20% increase in medium companies and 5% with usage of small firms. There was a significant drop in 2015 in social media usage at all-sized companies. Social networking site rate in large companies fell by nearly 30% to hit the lowest point just over 52%, after that, this figure witnessed a roughly increase to hit the bottom again at 79%. A similar trajectory was followed by small and medium corporations’ usage of social media, these figures dropped roughly in 2015 and then experienced an increasing zeal to the highest peak in 2016.
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dropped roughly in 2015 and then experienced an increasing zeal to the highest peak in 2016.
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