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The diagram provides information about the involved stages in the process of electricity fabrication

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The diagram provides information about the involved stages in the process of electricity fabrication. As is observed from the given diagram, This is a man-made linear process that starts with the combining of coal and oxygen and undergoing various chemical processes to produce electricity. In the earliest stage, coal is transported by a ramp to a furnace where it is heated and combined with coal. The result of this is slag and raw syngas is then sent for the removal of its harmful contaminants, CO2, mercury, and sulphur before using purified gas to run a gas turbine connected to a generator so that electricity is created. On the other hand, the gas turbine using purified gas also produces hot exhaust gases and these are used in a heat recovery steam generator which releases flue gases into the atmosphere. The last step is steam production by the generator activates the turbines of a steam turbine to bring out additional electricity.

The diagram provides information about the involved stages in the process of electricity fabrication. As is observed
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given
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man
-made linear process that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with the combining of coal and oxygen and undergoing various chemical processes to produce electricity.

In the earliest stage, coal is transported
 by a ramp to a furnace where it is heated
 and combined with coal. The result of this is slag and raw Possible spelling mistake found.syn gas
syngas
 is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 for the removal of its harmful contaminants, CO2, mercury, and Possible spelling mistake. 'sulphur' is British English.sulfur
sulphur
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 using purified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 to run a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcylindergeneratortransformer
turbine
 connected to a generator This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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that


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterElectricity
electricity
is created
.

On the other hand
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcylindergeneratortransformer
turbine
 using purified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
also
 produces hot exhaust gases and these are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in a heat recovery steam generator which releases flue gases into the atmosphere. The last step is steam production by the generator activates the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcylindergeneratortransformer
turbines
 of a steam You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcylindergeneratortransformer
turbine
 to bring out additional electricity. 