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Map comparison round city hospital

Map comparison round city hospital 1kLDN
In 2007, the city hospital is encapsulated by the ring road covering its north, east and west sides completely. When we start off from hospital road there are two bus stands present for either way traveling passengers. We can observe that one common area is used to park cars for the normal public as well as the staff of the city hospital whose entry gate is facing the hospital in the north. City hospital in the year 2010 is surrounded by ring road having parking for the public to the east of the hospital and having parking available for hospital employees on the south of the hospital, way to both parking is alongside ring road only. One roundabout at the intersection of the ring road and hospital road and another one is at the junction of city road and hospital road both have bus station as the commonplace. There are some major changes happened in the course of three years, as one can observe that previously the parking facility was common for both public as well as employees. Hospital road in 2007 had a bus stop but after three years it has changed to a bigger bus station located on the southwest side from the city hospital. 2 roundabouts have been established since 2007, one being on city road and hospital road and another one on the ring road and hospital road. Both circles have a way to the bus station.
In 2007, the city
hospital
is encapsulated
by the
ring
road
covering its north, east and west sides completely. When we
start
off from
hospital
road
there are two bus stands present for either way traveling passengers. We can observe that one common area is
used
to park cars for the normal public
as well
as the staff of the city
hospital
whose entry gate is facing the
hospital
in the north.

City
hospital
in the year 2010
is surrounded
by
ring
road
having
parking
for the public to the east of the
hospital
and having
parking
available for
hospital
employees on the south of the
hospital
, way to both
parking
is alongside
ring
road
only
. One roundabout at the intersection of the
ring
road
and
hospital
road
and another one is at the junction of city
road
and
hospital
road
both have bus station as the commonplace.

There are
some
major
changes
happened in the course of three years, as one can observe that previously the
parking
facility was common for both public
as well as
employees.
Hospital
road
in 2007 had a bus
stop
but
after three years it has
changed
to a bigger bus station located on the southwest side from the city
hospital
. 2 roundabouts have
been established
since 2007, one being on city
road
and
hospital
road
and another one on the
ring
road
and
hospital
road
. Both circles have a way to the bus station.
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IELTS academic Map comparison round city hospital

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