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The graph shows the rates of participation in three different activities in a UK sports club between 1983 and 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. Write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1 image

The graph shows the rates of participation in three different activities in a UK sports club between 1983 and 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. Writing Task 1 image 9rx1r

The graph illustrates the changes in three various sports club activities in the United Kingdom over a period of 20 years from 1983 to 2003. Overall, participation in swimming club dropped considerably during the period; meanwhile, team sports and gym activities rose significantly at the same time. In details, it is noticeable that the swimming club was the most admissible with 50% in 1983; however, it fell significantly until 1998. Afterwards, it levelled off by approximately 15% to the end of the period. In contrast, the rate of participants in team sports was around 30% and rose steadily, then peaked by about 30% in 1998. But it declined slightly as well as remained the constant amount like in 1983, making the most trendy club. Finally, the participation in gym activities stood at only 5% at first; nevertheless, this figure went up in a large scale and overtook the swimming club in around 1995 by 20%. Furthermore, it reached a peak of 25% and remained the same. Therefore, it became the second most popular activity.

The graph illustrates the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in three various sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 in the United Kingdom over a period of 20 years from 1983 to 2003.

Overall
, participation in swimming You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 dropped considerably
 during the period; meanwhile, team sports and gym You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 rose significantly
 at the same time.

In This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, it is noticeable that the swimming You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 was the most admissible with 50% in 1983; however
, it fell significantly
 until 1998. Afterwards, it levelled off by approximately 15% to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period. In contrast
, the rate of participants in team sports was around 30% and rose steadily
, then peaked by about 30% in 1998. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 it declined slightly
as well
 as remained the constant amount like in 1983, making the most trendy club.

Finally
, the participation in gym You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 stood at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 5% at first
; nevertheless
, this figure went up in a large scale and overtook the swimming You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 in around 1995 by 20%. Furthermore
, it reached a peak of 25% and remained the same. Therefore
, it became the second most popular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
. 