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The diagram illustrates the stage in which instant noodles are produced.

The diagram illustrates the stage in which instant noodles are produced. pjr3

The diagram illustrates the stage in which instant noodles are produced. In the first place, the trucks delivery flour to the storage silos. Then, it can be mixed with water and oil at the same time. After this, the mixture goes through many rollers in the dough sheets stage and immediately become soft, smooth and long dough strips in the fourth stages. Subsequently, those are formed into circle docs and entered the following stage: cooking with oil and drying stimutaneouly. The are also put into cups, meanwhile, added dried vegetables and spices so that the company can not only creates their own taste but also asserts the current position on the market. In the end, the nearly completed instant noodles cups need labelling- the unique brand's name and sealing in order to make all the process accomplished successfully before giving perfect products to customers.

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stage
 in which instant noodles are produced
. In the first
 place, the Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "trucks'" or "truck's"?trucks'truck's
trucks
 delivery flour to the storage silos. Then, it can be mixed
 with water and oil at the same time. After this, the mixture goes through This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 rollers in the dough sheets You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 and immediately become soft, smooth and long dough strips in the fourth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
. Subsequently
, those are formed
 into circle docs and entered the following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
: cooking with oil and drying Possible spelling mistake found.simultaneously
stimutaneouly
. Did you mean "they are" or "there are"?They areThere are
The are
also
 put into cups, meanwhile, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 dried vegetables and spices This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 can not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: "create"create
creates
 their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 taste This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 asserts the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 position on the market. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, the nearly
 completed instant noodles cups need labelling- the unique brand's name and sealing in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 all the process accomplished successfully
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 giving perfect products to customers. 