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The diagram illustrates the process that plastic bottles are recycled.

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The diagram illustrates the process that plastic bottles are recycled. Overall, there are 9 main steps in this process, which start when bottles are disposed of in the bin and end with products made from recycled materials. The first step occurs when people throw bottles away after using them. Then plastic bottles will be collected and transported by a specialized truck to a factory. What people do in the next step is classify bottles before compressing them into blocks. In the fifth step of the process, the blocks are crushed into small pieces and washed in the water. In the next step, all the pieces go through a machine to produce plastic pellets. Then people heat pellets under high temperatures to form raw material. Finally, products such as pencils, clothes, and bags will be manufactured from raw materials
The diagram illustrates the process that plastic
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bottles
are recycled
.
Overall
, there are 9 main
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steps
in this process, which
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start
when
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bottles
are disposed
of in the bin and
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end
with products made from recycled materials.

The
first
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step
occurs when
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people
throw
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bottles
away after using them. Then plastic
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bottles
will
be collected
and transported by a specialized truck to a factory. What
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people
do in the
next
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step
is classify
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bottles
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before
compressing them into blocks.

In the fifth
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step
of the process, the blocks
are crushed
into
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small
pieces and washed in the water. In the
next
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step
, all the pieces go through a machine to produce plastic pellets. Then
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people
heat pellets under high temperatures to form raw material.
Finally
, products such as pencils, clothes, and bags will
be manufactured
from raw materials

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process that plastic bottles are recycled.

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137 words
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