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The bar graphs elucidate the raise in salaries in 7 different countries over two periods of time(from 2000 to 2007 and 2008 to 2021).

The bar graphs elucidate the raise in salaries in 7 different countries over two periods of time(from 2000 to 2007 and 2008 to 2021). E7llB
The given graph depicts the growth in wages in the 7 nations between 2000-2012. In Canada, highest rise can be seen in 2005 which was 4. 5% whereas, -1 was the lowest one between the years 2000-2007. In France, highest was in 2002 which was 2. 5% and the lowest was in 2003, 0. 5%. Then In Germany, 2% growth was seen in 2000 while the lowest was -0. 4%. Fourth comes the Italy, in which most growth was observed in 2004. -1. 3% was the growth in 2002. Japan has the positive growth of 1. 75% in 2005 while in 2002, lowest growth was in wages (-1. 7%). In the UK and the USA have very high rate of wages. In both the countries, in the year 2000 was the highest. There was a growth of 2. 3% in Canada in 2012. France has 2. 5% of growth in 2009. Germany, in 2011, shows the highest in the rate of wages. In Italy, 1. 5% of growth took place in 2010. There was a 2. 5% of increment in Japan. The UK has positive growth in only year that was in 2009 which was 1%. The USA shows 0. 9% of growth in wages in 2009. To summarize, after 2010, downfall was seen more, before it was almost increasing.
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in wages in the 7 nations between 2000-2012.

In Canada,
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rise can be
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in 2005 which was 4. 5% whereas, -1 was the
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one between the years 2000-2007. In France, highest was in 2002 which was 2. 5% and the
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was in 2003, 0. 5%. Then In Germany, 2%
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was
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in 2000 while the
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was -0. 4%. Fourth
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the Italy, in which most
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was observed
in 2004. -1. 3% was the
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in 2002. Japan has the
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positive
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growth
of 1. 75% in 2005 while in 2002,
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lowest
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was in wages (-1. 7%). In the UK and the USA have
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high rate of wages. In both the countries, in the year 2000 was the highest.

There was a
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of 2. 3% in Canada in 2012. France has 2. 5% of
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in 2009. Germany, in 2011,
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the highest in the rate of wages. In Italy, 1. 5% of
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took place in 2010. There was a 2. 5% of increment in Japan. The UK has
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positive
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in
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year that was in 2009 which was 1%. The USA
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0. 9% of
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in wages in 2009.

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, after 2010, downfall was
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more,
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it was almost increasing.
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IELTS academic The bar graphs elucidate the raise in salaries in 7 different countries over two periods of time(from 2000 to 2007 and 2008 to 2021).

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