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The diagram illustrates the process of setting up a tent called a tepee.

The diagram illustrates the process of setting up a tent called a tepee. xm2W6
The diagram illustrates the process of setting up a tent called a tepee. At the beginning of the process, a rope is used to tie three long sticks of the same length together. Then, raise the tepee in form of the gigantic tripod by pulling the rope and attach more poles to establish its structure. In this stage, your fame of tent must be erect and be wrapped tightly. After that, a huge canvas is necessary to enfold around the frame of poles from the back wall. Make sure that your canvas does not stack on others. At the same time, metal pins are provided to pin both sides of the tent together. Finally, It's smart to secure the canvas to the ground using traditional metal tent stakes which help your tepee not to be blown away when there are some strong winds. Overall, the tent-making process combines five simple steps. Several tools are involved in the process, from rope to canvas.
The diagram illustrates the
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process
of setting up a
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tent
called a tepee.

At the beginning of the
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process
, a rope is
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used
to tie three long sticks of the same length together. Then, raise the tepee in form of the gigantic tripod by pulling the rope and attach more poles to establish its structure. In this stage, your fame of
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tent
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must
be erect and
be wrapped
tightly
. After that, a huge
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canvas
is necessary to enfold around the frame of poles from the back wall.
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Make
sure that your
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canvas
does not stack on others. At the same time, metal pins
are provided
to pin both sides of the
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tent
together.
Finally
, It's smart to secure the
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canvas
to the ground using traditional metal
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tent
stakes which
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help
your tepee not to
be blown
away when there are
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some
strong winds.

Overall
, the tent-making
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process
combines five simple steps. Several tools
are involved
in the
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process
, from rope to
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canvas
.

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process of setting up a tent called a tepee.

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162 words
6.0
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