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The diagram illustrates the process of producing of orange juice.

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The diagram illustrates the process of producing of orange juice. There are total of 12 steps which beginning with the growing of oranges and ending with the package juice to shops. At the start of the process, orange trees are planted and when the fresh oranges have ripened, they are harvested and carried by the wind to factories. They are extracted from the water by a squeezing machine after sorted. The squeezed juice transferred to another machine to undergo an evaporation process. During this process the water from juice is removed. And after shipping they are concentrated through adding some water, fresh orange juice is processed. And finally, the concentrated juice is then packaged and ultimately delivered to shops for solving.
The diagram illustrates the
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process
of producing of orange
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juice
. There are
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total
of 12 steps which beginning with the growing of oranges and ending with the package
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juice
to shops.

At the
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start
of the
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process
, orange trees
are planted
and when the fresh oranges have ripened, they
are harvested
and carried by the wind to factories. They
are extracted
from the water by a squeezing machine after sorted. The squeezed
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juice
transferred to another machine to undergo an evaporation
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process
. During this
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process
the water from
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juice
is removed
. And after shipping they
are concentrated
through adding
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some
water, fresh orange
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juice
is processed
. And
finally
, the concentrated
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juice
is then packaged and
ultimately
delivered to shops for solving.

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process of producing of orange juice.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
121 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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