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Electricity production and consuming

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This graph indicates the most countries that produce and consume an electricity among 2014. According to what is shown it is clearly evident that these industrial countries are at the first places of the list. The start is with china at the peak then, the US was in the second center. India were the last of these top five centres. Also, we can see that all these lands produce the power more than consuming it with exception for Russia the useage is near the production around 19% of the percentage. While, the lowest in this data is Korea, Rep with about 485. 1 for the production and 449. 5 in the consumption. Comparing this illustration in 2014 it is noticeable that the valliyes in energy industries is for Europian lands with one country from Asia which is Korea, Rep. To sum up, The highest and greatest at this field were China and united state with a massive numbers and both of them are the biggest in the industry and technology aspects.
This graph indicates the most countries that produce and consume an electricity among 2014. According to what
is shown
it is
clearly
evident that these industrial countries are at the
first
places of the list. The
start
is with china at the peak then, the US was in the second center. India were the last of these top five
centres
.
Also
, we can
see
that all these lands produce the power more than consuming it with exception for Russia the
useage
is near the production around 19% of the percentage. While, the lowest in this data is Korea, Rep with about 485. 1 for the production and 449. 5 in the consumption. Comparing this illustration in 2014 it is noticeable that the
valliyes
in energy industries is for
Europian
lands with one country from Asia which is Korea, Rep. To sum up, The highest and greatest at this field were China and united state with a massive numbers and both of them are the biggest in the industry and technology aspects.
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IELTS academic Electricity production and consuming

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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