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The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. LRPr
The chart illustrates the circulation of water in nature. Overall, it is clear that there are three main stages in this process, beginning with the evaporation of water and the formation of a cloud. The next step shows the water‘s journey after falling to the ground, and the process ends with saltwater intrusion. At the first step of the process, as a result of the sun’s heat, water evaporates into the air. It is estimated that 80% of total water vapour is taken from the ocean. Following this, a cloud is formed by the condensation of water vapour. In the next stage, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow. Water from the precipitation partly pours into the lakes or can be absorbed into the ground. The surface runoff, which is made from rainwater, creates the groundwater, and then flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer. The final stage of the process is the saltwater intrusion, where water from the ocean moves to the freshwater aquifers.
The chart illustrates the circulation of
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water
in nature.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that there are three main stages in this
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process
, beginning with the evaporation of
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water
and the formation of a cloud. The
next
step
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shows
the
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water‘s
journey after falling to the ground, and the
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process
ends with saltwater intrusion. At the
first
step of the
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process
,
as a result
of the sun’s heat,
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water
evaporates into the air. It
is estimated
that 80% of total
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water
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vapour
is taken
from the ocean. Following this, a cloud
is formed
by the condensation of
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water
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vapour
.

In the
next
stage, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow.
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Water
from the precipitation partly pours into the lakes or can
be absorbed
into the ground. The surface runoff, which
is made
from rainwater, creates the groundwater, and then flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer. The final stage of the
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process
is the saltwater intrusion, where
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water
from the ocean
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moves
to the freshwater aquifers.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

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168 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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