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The diagram illustrates the process of instant noodles production.

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The diagram illustrates the process of instant noodles production. In general, there are eight main stages, which are done by automated machines instead of humans, before the final products are delivered to the business market. As can be seen from the diagram, after the flour is delivered and put into storage silos, water and oil are added to make a mixer that originally has flour. Then, that combination is moved through rollers to dough sheets, which are cut into certain thin strips. Afterward, noodles are shaped into noodles discs before they are cooked by oil and dried. Next, these round-shaped noodles are packaged into an adequate number of cups followed by adding vegetables and spices. The final step concludes labeling and sealing each cup of noodles and the aforementioned ingredients. As soon as finishing manufacturing, these products are shipped to the shops or supermarkets. In conclusion, making instant noodles products has several stages and takes time to finish. However, all these steps are done without humans interference.
The diagram illustrates the process of instant
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noodles
production.
In general
, there are eight main stages, which
are done
by automated machines
instead
of humans,
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before
the final products
are delivered
to the business market.

As can be
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seen
from the diagram, after the flour
is delivered
and put into storage silos, water and oil are
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added
to
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make
a mixer that
originally
has flour. Then, that combination is
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moved
through rollers to dough sheets, which are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
into certain thin strips. Afterward,
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noodles
are shaped
into
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noodles
discs
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before
they
are cooked
by oil and dried.
Next
, these round-shaped
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noodles
are packaged
into an adequate number of cups followed by adding vegetables and spices. The final step concludes labeling and sealing each cup of
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noodles
and the aforementioned ingredients. As
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soon
as finishing manufacturing, these products
are shipped
to the shops or supermarkets.

In conclusion
, making instant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noodles
products has several stages and takes time to finish.
However
, all these steps
are done
without humans interference.
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