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The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram presents the manufacture of five different types of tea. It is immediately apparent that although all the teas are produced from the same leaf, the differences in the manufacturing process result in five different types of tea. The first three stages of manufacture are the same for all of the five teas. The leaves are grown, they are then plucked, and following this withering of the leaves occures. The final stage is also the same, which sees all the leaves dried in an oven. However, in the stages in between this, differing methods of production are employed. To begin, white tea is unique as it involves no other processing. In contrast, green, oolong and large leaf black tea are all rolled as part of the process. However, while green tea is steamed before being rolled but is not fermented, the other two teas are first rolled and then both fermented (oolong only slightly but large leaf black completely). Finally, small leaf black tea is neither steamed nor rolled, but is crushed before being fully fermented.
The diagram presents the manufacture of five
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different
types of
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tea
. It is immediately apparent that although all the
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teas
are produced
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leaf
, the differences in the manufacturing process result in five
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different
types of tea.

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first
three stages of manufacture are the same for
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five
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teas
. The
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leaves
are grown
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leaves
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occures
.
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all the
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leaves
dried in an oven.
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are employed
.

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begin
, white
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tea
is unique as it involves no other processing.
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, green,
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oolong
and large
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leaf
black
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tea
are all
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rolled
as part of the process.
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, while green
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tea
is steamed
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before
being
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rolled
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but
is not fermented, the other two
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teas
are
first
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rolled
and then both fermented (
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oolong
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only
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large
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black completely).
Finally
,
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small
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black
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tea
is neither steamed nor
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rolled
,
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is crushed
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before
being
fully
fermented.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types.

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177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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