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The chart shows the ratio of different age groups found in Italy and Yemen during 2000 and it also illustrates the predicted ratio for 2050. Overall, as per the future prediction, in Yemen, the population of young people could extend in the upcoming years, and for Italy it’s been said that, the population of seniors could increase

The chart shows the ratio of different age groups found in Italy and Yemen during 2000 and it also illustrates the predicted ratio for 2050. Overall, as per the future prediction, in Yemen, the population of young people could extend in the upcoming years, and for Italy it’s been said that, the population of seniors could increase 1kNOq
The chart shows the ratio of different age groups found in Italy and Yemen during 2000 and it also illustrates the predicted ratio for 2050. Overall, as per the future prediction, in Yemen, the population of young people could extend in the upcoming years, and for Italy it’s been said that, the population of seniors could increase. As number of young people in Yemen, were around 46% and number of children 50% in 2000, According to the future prediction, the number of younger people could become 57% from 46% and population of children could be about 37%. Because most of the population in Yemen counted to of younger peoples during both periods, the amount of old age people stood in past and forecasted to remain, just under 10%. As compared to Yemen, The population of senior citizen stood higher during both periods; in 2000, 24% of Italian was above the age of 60%. This ratio will probably grow up to 42% in 2050, quite significant than Yemen.
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