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The diagram illustrates step-by step process for the making of bricks for building industry.

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The diagram illustrates step-by step process for the making of bricks for building industry. Overall, there are a total of seven stages in the process, beginning from the stage of pure clay and eventually the final stage of ready-to-use industrial bricks. To begin, the clay is dug out from the ground and spread on the metal grip over the roller. After this step finished, it is subsequently blended with water and sand in the suitable proportion. Afterwards, the moulding could be used in either hand or machine by wire cutter. At this stage, the moulded brick should be firstly dried in a special oven for 24-48 hours. Next, the dried bricks need to be burnt with moderate temperature of 200*C- 900*C in open kilns to increase the density and hardness. Again, the higher temperature up to 870*C- 1300*C is used to have a good quality of a brick. Eventually, the heated bricks are cooled off for 48- 72 hours. As a final stage, the desirable and qualified bricks are ready for packaging and delivering process.
The diagram illustrates step-by step process for the making of
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bricks
for building industry.
Overall
, there are a total of seven
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stages
in the process, beginning from the
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stage
of pure clay and
eventually
the final
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stage
of ready-to-
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industrial bricks.

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begin
, the clay
is dug
out from the ground and spread on the metal grip over the roller. After this step finished, it is
subsequently
blended with water and sand in the suitable proportion. Afterwards, the
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moulding
could be
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used
in either hand or machine by wire cutter. At this
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stage
, the
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moulded
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brick
should be
firstly
dried in a special oven for 24-48 hours.

Next
, the dried
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bricks
need to
be burnt
with moderate temperature of
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200*C
-
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900*C
in open kilns to increase the density and hardness. Again, the higher temperature up to
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870*C
-
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1300*C
is
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used
to have a
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good
quality of a
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brick
.
Eventually
, the heated
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bricks
are cooled
off for
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48- 72
hours. As a final
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stage
, the desirable and qualified
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bricks
are ready for packaging and delivering process.
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