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Pie chart gives the data of different age group people and the reasons that makes them most happy

Pie chart gives the data of different age group people and the reasons that makes them most happy k5W6O

The pie chart illustrate five different perspective that makes people of various age group joyful. Overall, it can be observes that the major reason behind the happiness of both the age group is achievement at their working place. In both under 30 year and over 30 year it remains almost same at 31% and 32 respectively. Apart from that traveling also remain common and constant in both the group which is 15% in under 30 and 14% in over 30 year of age group. However, with increasing age financial security gives more pleasure to individuals which can be denoted by the increasement if 6% in the elder age group. Mere change in pursing hobbies was observed with the decline if 2% which states that with aging process tiny change in the activity of our interest decreases. Also, other factors which consist 14% in the younger group shows a drop of 4% and reaches at 10% in the group of over 30 year.

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