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The diagram illustrates how to produce sugar from cane.

The diagram illustrates how to produce sugar from cane. PWrDg
The diagram illustrates how to produce sugar from cane. Overall, there are three main steps in this process, beginning with cultivate plants, following by crushing and ending with drying and cooling. In the first stage of the process, sugar canes are grown in tropical climate. It takes 12-18 months to grow. After that, the mature plant is harvested by hand or modern farming machines. Next, canes are stripped and crushed to produce juice. In the next stage of the process, the limestone is added. Impurities blind to the lime and are remove by filtration. Following this, the juice is heated and transferred to evaporators to extract a syrup. Then, centrifuge separates the sugar crystals from the syrup. Finally, once dried and cooled, sugar crystals remain.
The diagram illustrates how to produce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sugar
from cane.

Overall
, there are three main steps in this process, beginning with cultivate plants, following by crushing and ending with drying and cooling.

In the
first
stage of the process,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sugar
canes
are grown
in tropical climate. It takes 12-18 months to grow. After that, the mature plant
is harvested
by hand or modern farming machines.
Next
, canes
are stripped
and crushed to produce juice.

In the
next
stage of the process, the limestone is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
. Impurities blind to the lime and are remove by filtration. Following this, the juice
is heated
and transferred to evaporators to extract a syrup. Then, centrifuge separates the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sugar
crystals from the syrup.
Finally
, once dried and cooled,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sugar
crystals remain.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how to produce sugar from cane.

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