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The diagram illustrates how dirty water is passed through a simple water filter until it comes out clean.

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The diagram illustrates how dirty water is passed through a simple water filter until it comes out clean. At first, dirty and muddy water are poured from a transparent glass into the open end of a container. The first part of the large container to which dirty water flows for filtration is a layer of filter paper. The water then passes through the filter paper and continues down to pass through gravel and small rocks. Once it has passed through this layer, it continues to the fine sand layer for further filtration. The final filter layer is then a cotton wool filter. Once the water has passed through this layer, it eventually appears as dean water. In conclusion, it can be seen that dirty water is poured at the beginning of the filtration process and when it has passed 4 stages of filtration it will become clean water.
The diagram illustrates how
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is
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passed
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through
a simple
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filter
until it
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comes
out clean.

At
first
,
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dirty
and muddy
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water
are poured
from a transparent glass into the open
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end
of a container. The
first
part of the large container to which
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dirty
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water
flows for filtration is a
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layer
of
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filter
paper.

The
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water
then passes
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through
the
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filter
paper and continues down to pass
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through
gravel and
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small
rocks. Once it has
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passed
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through
this
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layer
, it continues to the fine sand
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layer
for
further
filtration.

The final
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filter
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layer
is then a cotton wool
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filter
. Once the
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water
has
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passed
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through
this
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layer
, it
eventually
appears as dean water.

In conclusion
, it can be
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seen
that
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dirty
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water
is poured
at the beginning of the filtration process and when it has
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passed
4 stages of filtration it will become clean
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water
.

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how dirty water is passed through a simple water filter until it comes out clean.

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5 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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