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The diagram illustrates how cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between in 1983 and 1992.

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The diagram illustrates how cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between in 1983 and 1992. It stood at 100 in 1983 and doubled over the next 3 years, after then it slowly went up to 225 in 1987 but next year it felled despite of increased Diarrhea. Then it didn’t expect to increase in Mashhad in 1988 but this disease quadruple over the next year. It slightly felled next year but it didn’t clearly changed. In 1992, Diarrhea was completely prevented. In conclusion It can be seen this diagram cases of diarrhea in Mashhad. It is interesting to note diarrhea slowly increased. Diarrhea rapidly went to peak about 400 in 1989. Eventually it was completely prevented by doctors.

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next
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 went up to 225 in 1987 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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next
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year
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despite of
 increased Diarrhea. Then it didn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to increase in Mashhad in 1988 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this disease quadruple over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
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year
. It slightly
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next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it didn’t clearly
The verb 'didn't' requires base form of this verb: "change"change
changed
. In 1992, Diarrhea was completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
prevented
.

In conclusion


It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 this diagram cases of diarrhea in Mashhad. It is interesting to note diarrhea slowly
 increased. Diarrhea rapidly
 went to peak about 400 in 1989. Eventually
 it was completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
prevented
 by doctors. 