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The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collected the rainwater from the houses and then use as drinking water.

The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collected the rainwater from the houses and then use as drinking water. rLElp
The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collected the rainwater from the houses and then use as drinking water. Overall, the rain water collected from the houses can be used for drinking water after it has been processed by being filtered and then being treatred with chemicales. Initially, the rainwater which falls on the rooftop collected by the gutter and then runs down the pipe to the drain at the bottom. Each houses collect the rainwater in the same way. and then the rainwater passed into along pipe from the drain to the water filter underground. The rainwater passed through the water filter to remove any impurities, once it has been filtered, it cohtinues along the pipes to a storage tank. From this point the rainwater is ready to treat with chemicale in order to be fit. When the water is ready for drinking it travels along pipes that lead back into the houses in the town where people can use it for daily consumption.
The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collected the
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rainwater
from the
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houses
and then
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use
as drinking water.

Overall
, the rain
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water
collected from the
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houses
can be
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used
for drinking
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water
after it has
been processed
by
being filtered
and then being
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treatred
with
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chemicales
.

Initially
, the
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rainwater
which falls on the rooftop collected by the gutter and then runs down the
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pipe
to the drain at the bottom.
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Each
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houses
collect the
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rainwater
in the same way
.
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and
then the
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rainwater
passed into along
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pipe
from the drain to the
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water
filter underground.

The
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rainwater
passed through the
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water
filter to remove any impurities, once it has
been filtered
, it
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cohtinues
along the
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pipes
to a storage tank. From this point the
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rainwater
is ready to treat with
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chemicale
in order to
be fit
. When the
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water
is ready for drinking it travels along
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pipes
that lead back into the
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houses
in the town where
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people
can
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use
it for daily consumption.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collected the rainwater from the houses and then use as drinking water.

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6.0
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