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The table below provides information on the problems faced by schoolchildren and students at the Cambridge Education Center in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below provides information on the problems faced by schoolchildren and students at the Cambridge Education Center in 2010 and 2020. eeVr7
The table shows challenges in learning  encountered by children and students at Cambridge Education Center in 2010 and 2020. Overall, the learning problems faced by students in School Center decreased in two out of six learning areas; while, educational problems of children increased marginally in the same number of educational areas in the ten-year period. Students saw a significant decline in learning issues for most problem areas after ten years, with children showing improvement in three out of six learning areas. The learning area with the highest improvement was following instructions, with a 20% decrease in problems encountered by students. Meanwhile, it is witnessed a slight increase in educational issues encountered by its students after ten years as the percentage of learning difficulties increased in three categories. The learning area with most increase in problems was following instructions (5% increase), followed by concentration (5% increase). The percentage of students facing difficulty  with their listening ability remained  unchanged in 2010 and 2020.
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challenges in
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learning
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encountered by children and
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students
at Cambridge Education Center in 2010 and 2020.

Overall
, the
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learning
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problems
faced by
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students
in School Center decreased in two out of six
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learning
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areas
; while, educational
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problems
of children increased
marginally
in the same number of educational
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areas
in the ten-year period.

Students
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saw
a significant decline in
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learning
issues for most
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problem
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areas
after ten years, with children showing improvement in three out of six
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learning
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areas
. The
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learning
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area
with the highest improvement was following instructions, with a 20% decrease in
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problems
encountered by students.

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is witnessed
a slight increase in educational issues encountered by its
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students
after ten years as the percentage of
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learning
difficulties increased in three categories. The
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learning
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area
with most increase in
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problems
was following instructions (5% increase), followed by concentration (5% increase).

The percentage of
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students
facing difficulty
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with their listening ability remained
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unchanged in 2010 and 2020.
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IELTS academic The table below provides information on the problems faced by schoolchildren and students at the Cambridge Education Center in 2010 and 2020.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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