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The diagram shows how rainwater is collected from houses in an Australian town and then used as drinking water.

The diagram shows how rainwater is collected from houses in an Australian town and then used as drinking water. OMDqy
The diagram shows how rainwater is collected from houses in an Australian town and then used as drinking water. Overall, the collected rainwater from houses can be used as drinking water after it has been treated by filtering and then chemical treatment. First, the rainwater that falls on the roof is collected by the gutter and then runs through the pipe into the drain at the ground. Each house collects the rainwater in the same way. and then pass the rainwater in along pipe from the drain to the water filter under the ground. The rainwater is passed through the water filter to remove impurities, and after filtering it continues to flow through the pipes to a storage tank. From here, the rainwater can be treated with chemicals to make it drinkable. When the water is ready to drink, it travels through pipes that lead back to the city's homes where people can use it for everyday consumption.
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in an Australian town and then
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rainwater
that falls on the roof
is collected
by the gutter and then runs
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the
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pipe
into the drain at the ground. Each
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then pass the
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in along
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pipe
from the drain to the
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water
filter under the ground.

The
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rainwater
is passed
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through
the
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water
filter to remove impurities, and after filtering it continues to flow
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through
the
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pipes
to a storage tank. From here, the
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rainwater
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with chemicals to
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make
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water
is ready to drink, it travels
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pipes
that lead back to the city's homes where
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people
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it for everyday consumption.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how rainwater is collected from houses in an Australian town and then used as drinking water.

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6.5
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